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Well done Emily. I like the colours and use of space plus your definition of E Coli. I wondered, however, if you might change a couple of words to being a bit bit more formal like 'poo' and 'stuff'?
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Well done Emily. I like the colours and use of space plus your definition of E Coli. I wondered, however, if you might change a couple of words to being a bit bit more formal like 'poo' and 'stuff'?
ReplyDeleteGreat use of space Emily. The color is great well done. But I am not quite sure on the picture in the middle.
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